Apr 21, 2010

hottest cloud




the day was never better,
when u said a hi,
your voice was never sweeter,
when u said goodbye..

i never thought the day would come,
it hurt me,you'll never know why,
when u walked past me without a word,
i felt im just too big to cry..

felt my small heart being so heavy,
as the day was much hotter than ever,
and so the pain grew much severe,
i wish i had been gone forever..

many say clouds just pass by quickly ,
but this one is an exception,
it never moved an inch away from me,
as i was under the hottest cloud forever..

not even a drop of rain above me,
but i felt the drops below my eyes,
i realised they were not drops of rain,
but i knew im just too big to cry ..



5 comments:

srividya said...

HEY IT WAS AWESOME DA:) I GUES ITS UR PERSONAL FEELING TOO:) I REALLY LOVE UR POEMS A LOT:) KEEP BLOGGING:)

Unknown said...

GETHUU!!!!!!!!!! MAN!!!!

shyam said...

thank u so much to u both :)

Anonymous said...

wers s d usual twist wic u hav in al d poems? xcept dis? wanted dis 2 b peculiar eh? cant leave widout a comment.. :P really awesum! :)

VIDHYALAKSHMI said...

Lovable... Really Nice!!!