I was walking on a lonely lane,
with not even my shadow behind me,
felt like being isolated from my kind,
and i seemed to be out of my mind..
Saw a figure walking towards me,
i never dared to look at its face,
but unusually it wasn't fearsome,
as i walked and walked and walked..
Queer thoughts ruffled me,
these were all so unusual to me,
used to fear even a stare at me,
but no drop of sweat went down my spine..
I was the brightest in the lane,
but none seemed to be interested in me,
everything seemed to be out of place,
and i felt i wasn't of their race..
Heavy wind seemed to be blowing,
the branches of trees kept waving,
unusually,i dint feel a dust touching,
and i felt it was not worth living..
At last saw a figure of man,at the end of the lane,
i was curious,took my hands to his shoulder,
but there was no response,then i realised why,
that i wasn't walking,but gliding down the lane..
with not even my shadow behind me,
felt like being isolated from my kind,
and i seemed to be out of my mind..
Saw a figure walking towards me,
i never dared to look at its face,
but unusually it wasn't fearsome,
as i walked and walked and walked..
Queer thoughts ruffled me,
these were all so unusual to me,
used to fear even a stare at me,
but no drop of sweat went down my spine..
I was the brightest in the lane,
but none seemed to be interested in me,
everything seemed to be out of place,
and i felt i wasn't of their race..
Heavy wind seemed to be blowing,
the branches of trees kept waving,
unusually,i dint feel a dust touching,
and i felt it was not worth living..
At last saw a figure of man,at the end of the lane,
i was curious,took my hands to his shoulder,
but there was no response,then i realised why,
that i wasn't walking,but gliding down the lane..
9 comments:
You can sometimes feel the same without giving the "sixth sense" excuse.. :).. when people dont remember you.. when people u love dont respond to u.. nice concept :-)
am really doubtful whther u hav got the meanin of ma poem rit??;)
er.. ur poem means that u finally realize that u r a corpse right? u say u r gliding.. so u r a ghost! er.. wrong?
right divya..;)
oh well.. then you dont understand what i implied :).. Guys seldom understand girls pheelings n our sensitivity to things.. *sniff* :P
rno shadow? techincally, that would make you a vampire. and talking of vampires, a quick lesson here, try giving a romantic edge to your words, and still bring the feeling of lonesomeness. I can't wait already for your next entry;
Wow, awesome! That was really interesting. Didn't know you were a writer, Shyam :) - A really good one.
nice one ... i like this :)
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